First Draft of Magazine No.1
Feedback :
30/09/24
- Make the subject more big
- Less wordy sell lines
- Masthead and Picture are nice
- Loose some words on the pull quote - make it more enigmatic
- The font is nice and works well together
Here are some videos I added on my website : video : https://youtu.be/n7iUl_Y4PX0?si=6QzjGVdrd3qAmEEF Here is the fake advert I made using ...
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